Thursday, February 21, 2013

Isaiah Pack Story for Writing Class

Hi guys, here is my story that I wrote for writing class. Sorry that it's really weird:


            There once was a man named Robert Pettit, who had a dog named Murda. Rob (that was what he liked to be called) was very fond of animals, but not very fond of people. He was retired at seventy-two years of age and he had never been married. His dog, Murda, was fairly young (for a dog), because she had been recently purchased after the death of Rob’s fifteen-year old dog, Joe. Rob and Murda lived in a fairly large house about twenty miles outside of Portland, Oregon.
            One day at about noon, Rob went out to feed his dog when a he witnessed a giant bird clasp Murda in its talons and fly off into the woods. Rob desperately tried to run after it, but it was of no use. Rob wasn’t the runner that he used to be, and there was no way he could have even traveled at half the speed the bird was. However, Rob ran. He ran as fast as he could (which wasn’t very fast), straight into the woods. Pretty soon, Rob could not see the bird at all, but was just running in the direction he had last seen the bird go. Rob panted and slowed down, but never stopped. He kept going, because he loved Murda. Suddenly, a protruding root tripped Rob, who fell down, hitting his head on a stone and going unconscious.
            Now, it just so happened that there were two children, brother and sister, named Damian and Lilly. These siblings lived nearby, and they often liked to run into the adventurous forest to play their games. As they were playing in the forest, they saw the old man and stopped. Rob’s forehead was bleeding, but not at a very fast rate. Damian, seeing the blood, instructed Lilly to run home as fast as she could and get their father, who was outside weeding the garden.
Soon after Lilly left, the giant bird landed right in front of Damian and Rob, put Murda on the ground, and prepared to feast upon his lunch. Just before taking a bite, though, Damian caught the bird’s eye. Seeing a bigger potential meal, the bird left Murda and moved towards the stunned Damian. The fear in Damian’s eyes seemed to build the bird’s confidence, so it took off toward Damian. The boy tried to run, but was snatched up by the giant bird to be carried off as a snack.
Just in the nick of time, though, Lilly appeared with her father, who leapt up and grabbed one of the giant bird’s legs. Pulling it down, he was able to bring the bird to the ground. Damian rolled out of its talons and hit the ground hard. Lilly scurried off to get some of the family’s neighbors to help. As his father struggled with the bird, Damian crawled over to Rob, who had been unconscious the whole time. The boy got his handkerchief out of his pocket to stop the blood a little, even though a lot of it was drying by now. Murda was also at Rob’s side, rubbing her nose softly against the side of his head.
At this point, Lilly came back with one of the neighbors, who had his handgun. There was, however, a problem. The neighbor did not want to hurt Lilly’s father (who was struggling with the bird) in the process of stopping the bird. As he attempted to aim around Lilly’s father to shoot, Lilly screamed, which frightened him and he unintentionally pulled the trigger. The next thing he knew, the bird and Lilly’s father were both on the ground.
Both the neighbor and Lilly rushed over to him, but fortunately he got up and declared that he was fine. Then, all three acknowledged Damian and Rob, who were on the forest floor nearby. After seeing the condition of the old man, the neighbor rushed home to give a call to the paramedics, who were there shortly. It took many days of sleeping in a coma, but Rob was eventually okay, and he was happily reunited with his dog. Because of this experience, Rob made friends with his neighbors, and became a people-person. If you asked any of his neighbors now, they would all agree that he is the social butterfly of the neighborhood. For the rest of his life, Rob enjoyed being around and talking to others, especially Lilly and Damian. Through all this, though, he never neglected his beloved Murda.

Wednesday, February 20, 2013

Blog Posts?

Hi Everyone!

Could all of you reply to this letting me know whether or not you can post on this blog? So far I haven't seen posts from any of you, so please let me know soon! :)

-Jemison Stripes